帮忙看下这篇雅思作文大概得多少分?

帮忙看下这篇雅思作文大概得多少分?
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As a common argument,if universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject has been discussed for a long time.Some people hold the view that we should treat different sexual people equally because everyone has right.But in my opinion,universities do not need to accept the same number of boys and girls in every subject.
Physical factor is not only the first but the most important reason.As known to us,the power in boy’s body is higher than that of girl.It determines that boy can do more power-work than girl.For example,when entered a constructive place,did you have the chance to see a women who was transport the tricks or a thin girl who was mixing the cement with water and dirt?It must be a terrible situation.
Secondly,the performance will affect more.We either enjoy the serves from a sweet female nurse or the injection from her.But if there is a muscle-man instead,we all want to run.
Finally,these people who think that universities should accept equal numbers of boys and girls in every subject are too emphasis the rights of girls.Considering about girls’ hearts,equality is not the best choice.Imaging that,few girls want to study and work in where are full with dust and smell.They also do not like the heavy box or strong solar.
According to these reasons below,I think universities should accept different numbers of male and female in subjects.Because no matter from physical aspect and mental aspect,male and female art different roles.
给个评分就好~模拟练习时写的 应该比较接近真实成绩了.