求各位高手帮我看下我的中考英语作文能得多少分.

求各位高手帮我看下我的中考英语作文能得多少分.
A true story
I have a good friend .Her name is Gina.She is sixteen years old.She is a nice girl.
I had a really hard time with my Englishi tow years ago .I often failed in Englishi exams.And I was upset .She came to me and cheered me up .She said reading Englishi louldy was a good way to learn Englishi .With her help ,I made progress.Now I enjoy learning Englishi.
This is a true story .Gina changes my life .I think I should say “thanks” to Gina .
Thank you ,Gina!
那个 tow 是 two 打的时候错了.写的时候没错