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There is a pleasant weekend in my mind .I could not forget it .On april 13,I went to my grandmother’s home to celebrated my birthday.My grandmother was very delighted.She given me a big hug.Over dinner ,she doused the glim and took out a cake with burning candles and smiled and said to me ”happy birthday!” my parents sang birthday song to me.I closed my eyes and made a wish ,after that I blew the burning candles.We chatted a lot.On the second day,I played with my friends in the park happily.we flew kites,sang songs ,listened to music and painted together.I thought this weekend I was very weary,but is certainly very joyful.

“There is a pleasant weekend in my mind .I could not forget it .”-there was,用过去时比较好,I can not forget,不要用虚拟.celebrated -celebrate,前面有to 了,后面是动词原型given-gaveshe doused the gli...