帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~
帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~
Refer to hobby. I have a lot of hobbies. For example reading,singing,traveling and so on. When I singing I feel very cool and enjoy the songs. traveling can let me relax and embrace by mother nature. But I prefer to read. The reason is reading book can let me know lots of things. Books helped me to enlarge the extension of the knowledge. So I think books is my teacher. I like reading books.
4.Introduce your family.
I have a nice family. There has five people in my family. My mother,father,sister husband and I. My mother is little bit overweight.I really love my mother’s cook..and my father is strong. I also have a beautiful sister.she is very cute..When we was yong. we like stickes that always together..eating,sleeping,shopping and so on .we always deal with something. Now I have a nice husband. He is policeman. I am very honor to him.Because he can proect people.
Refer to hobby.I have a lot of hobbies.Such as reading,singing,traveling and so on.When I singing I feel very cool and enjoy the songs.Traveling can make me relax and embrace by Mother Nature.But I prefer to read.Because reading books can help me know lots of things.Books helped me to enlarge the extension of the knowledge.So I think books are my teacher.I like reading books.
4.Introduce your family.
I have a nice family.There have five people in my family.My mother,my father,my sister’ husband and I.My mother is little bit overweight.I really love my mother’s cook.And my father is strong.I also have a beautiful sister.she is very cute.When we were young.We like stickes that always together..eating,sleeping,shopping and so on .we always deal with something.Now I have a nice husband.He is policeman.I am very honor to him.Because he can proect people.