Last sunday was Women's Day.It was my mother's festival.I can tell my mother a surprised.Because my mother important for

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Last sunday was Women's Day.It was my mother's festival.I can tell my mother a surprised.Because my mother important for us.She was tired.So I can help my mother do the housework.Father is cooking.I runned help my father.father is very happy.He say me is was great.Because the fish is he and me cook.Mother is pround of me.On the desk,fish,juice,vegetable and rice.It was great.My mother is happied.可以帮我看一下我写的英语作文有那些错误吗?


He say me is was great.Because the fish is he and me cook.
这里的me换成I会更好.

On the desk,fish,juice,vegetable and rice.
Desk换成Table,在食物面前加个It have会更好.
两个me都改为I吗?