英语演讲稿纠错,希望大家看看有没有语法错误以及用词正不正确
英语演讲稿纠错,希望大家看看有没有语法错误以及用词正不正确
What are we livingfor? This is a standing dish but hard to answer. Lack of other people’scare, Jang Tae-san lives aimlessly. He joins the gangster organization,wandering in the by-lane all the time and not minding the title of gangster. Hesays: “I live merely for not dying.”One day, he learnsthat he has a 7-year-old daughter he has never known. His ex-girlfriend has trackedhim down because the little girl has leukemia and desperately needs a bonemarrow transplant. When a blood test shows that he could save her life, hesuddenly has a purpose for living. He must save his daughter’s life.At that time,however, the gang boss, who colludes with a parliamentarian in order tomake a profit illegally, changes his life again. He is framed for murder andeven he is in the detention house, the gang boss wants to kill him.After a traffic accident on the way to the *, he tries to escape.His life goalbecomes clear. In order to ensure the bone marrow transplant to run on the railand prove his innocence, he struggles desperately for the first time in hislife while being hunted by both the police and a ruthless assassin.Fortunately, the procuratorand the police gradually trust him and give aid to him. Thanks to these justpeople, the gang boss and the parliamentarian is arrested and Tae-sansucceeds in giving his daughter a second life.
没有语法错误,很好.
就是在最后加一个结尾(closing sentence)就更好了!
祝你演讲顺利!