雅思作文~这篇作文这样写跑没跑题?

雅思作文~这篇作文这样写跑没跑题?
.Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away society”,because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of.To want degree do you agree with this opinion?
The advancement of our living conditon is accompaned by severe pollution of our evironment.In term of the disposal of the garbage we generate currently,I hold a positive attitude,even though there are still some problems we cannot handle.
I have to admit that we are generating rubbish every day and even every single minute.In the fast-pasced world,everyting is designed for the sake of "convenience".Processed food packed in cans and bottle can be seen in supermarkets.Those processed food enable people to store them and take them out to eat when necessary.However,the disposal of the cans or other packages may be difficult,as they can neither be degregated nor be reused.
Despite the existing indisposible problems,many measures have been done and the effects are remarkable.Government have given priority to educating people on protecting the evironment and how to protect the evironment.Non-profit advertisements can always be seen on the television which has exerted a subtle influnce on human's behavior.Also,in recent years,supermarkets and big shopping malls in our country charge for plastic bags.As a result,majorty of people prepare bags or baskets themselves when going shopping.In addition,plenty of advanced technology has been used into manufacturing.
In conclusion,every body is making an effort to enhence our evionment and the prospect is optimistic,.This,it is unfair to say we are living in a "throw-away".-societyI believe the rubbish will be disposed someday in the future.