求各位大神帮我看看有木有语法错误呀?

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求各位大神帮我看看有木有语法错误呀?
I am the person in charge of the school newspaper.I need a student to take the position of English version editor for urgent.
我是校报负责人,急需在校内聘一名同学任英文版的编辑。

person后面加个who is
还有urgent是个形容词 应该换成名次我是校报负责人,急需在校内聘一名同学任英文版的编辑。是这句话的翻译,你认为是不是正确的?把for去掉 把urgent变成副词 因为副词是跟在动词后面所以是I'm looking for a student urgently to be responsible of the English version editor.be responsible of 是对...负责的意思后面那小段话就是英语版编辑的负责人的意思.