Holiday Journey英语作文

Travel in Lijiang
I heard Lijiang is a very beautiful city when I was young.I travel there in a holidy with my parents.I went there plane.I saw there were many moutain when I got out the plane.The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucehng the fist day,we bought some intresting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng.The second day ,we went to the Yulong snow moutain,it's beautiful,and it's my first time see the snow.I played with the snow happily.My father told me that Yulong snow moutain is a famous place in China,many people came here every year.I was happy in this trip,even like there better than Beijing!换一个行不行，还有作人要厚道，转发别人的要写上应你的要求，再给你一篇算了，我还得改一下这文章，我家天津，这很不好找的，我找了5小时了