这句话语法和用词上有什么问题?有问题话尽量指出,好的话有追加的分数
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这句话语法和用词上有什么问题?有问题话尽量指出,好的话有追加的分数
This is a video which talked about the behaviour tracking on internet,Gary Kovacs used some instances of himself and his daughter to prove how serious the privacy protection situation is now .Then he gave the reasons why these websites tack people’s behaviour,Finally he suggested people should not tolerate it any more.
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第一句话： 1、影片的内容几乎是固定不变的,个人认为在讲述影片内容时不需要用过去时,一般现在时即可. 2、Gary Kovacs ……situation is now ,这是一个完整的句子,其前应用句号或者一个连词.Gary Kovacs 以...