英语小短文,检查语法书写错误,
英语小短文,检查语法书写错误,
I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other people which focus on the paper.
The restaurant possesses a beautiful name which is called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant because of its location next to the famous West Lake.We family were invited the restaurant and enjoyed a nice meal,including dongpo meat,xihu fish and delicious buffet .The meal was so tasteful that we all felt an tremendous honor of being invited to enjoy the meal.
So I am happy to recommend the restaurant to other people who like enjoying food and feel native custom of Hangzhou .Look forward to your good taste in the West Lake Restaurant.
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I‘m writing this letter to recommend a restaurant to your newspaper and other people which【which用得不对,因为是人物的先行词,这里我建议把other people which换成those who会更高级】 focus on the paper.
The restaurant possesses a beautiful name which is【删去which is会更简洁明了】 called the Hangzhou West Lake Restaurant because of its location next to【of its location next to改为it is located next to】 the famous West Lake.We family were invited 【添加一个to】the restaurant and enjoyed a nice meal,including dongpo meat,xihu fish and delicious buffet .The meal was so tasteful that we all felt an tremendous honor of being invited to enjoy the meal.【这里的being inveited to enjoy the meal出现有点多了,有点繁琐,应改为feeding our stomaches heavenly.】
So【so换成Therefore】 I am happy to recommend【用suggest,一个单词用得太多老师会疲倦的】 the restaurant to other people【other people还是换回those】 who like enjoying food and feel 【feel改成feeling】native custom of Hangzhou .Look forward to your good taste【taste换成journey】 in the West Lake Restaurant.
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