初一的英语小作文,麻烦帮忙修改一下
初一的英语小作文,麻烦帮忙修改一下
I want to be a writer
I want to be a writer when i grow up,because i like readingbooks.Books can make me feel happy or excited.And i wang to write some books for readers.So that,i will feel successful and readers can feel happy,too.
If one day i die,These books will be my wealth.I should do some things when i am alive.So i want to be a writer to minute my lives.
But it is difficult to be a writer.However,i won't give up.I will write some article from now on.I think i should start out small.Then i can find it is valuable for me.
……好像很多不对呢……
article是否可数呢?(⊙_⊙)?
麻烦帮忙修改一下语法错误O(∩_∩)O谢谢
还有：
【我会为我的理想努力奋斗的】也麻烦翻译一下~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦
O(∩_∩)O谢谢 麻烦了【写的不好请原谅】
【如果可以的话,最好有讲解】
'some article' 加-s
Then i can find it is valuable for me.去掉is更好
some things 换为something
my lives 改为单数
Books can make me feel happy or excited.改为Books can lighten my world.
I will study hard to achieve my dream.
or 改为 and
so that 改为 in this way
start out small 是中式英语 英语中没有这样的表达 删掉这句话 或者
改为start from now on
article 在这里加S（有时不加 你要好好了解它的用法 还有其他很多意思）
if one day i die 改为 if i die one day
1.wang 改为want
2.,too去掉,有点多余
3.for readers.So that,i will feel 改为for readers so that i can feel
4.If one day i die改为If i die one day
5.some things 改为something
6.my lives改为my live
7.some article 改为some articles
8.start out small.改为starts from the minor