初一的自我介绍怎么写啊?

Hello,everyone!I'm very glad to stand here and introduce myself to all of you.My name is May.I'm a middle school student in Grade One.I have many friends,and all of them think I'm very outgoing.I have many hobbies,just like swimming,singing,dancing,painting and so on.I can also play the guitar,dreums and piano.My favorite cartoon is DETECTIVE CONAN.Conan is a famous detective.I like him not only because of his cool,but also his intelligence.Well,this is me,a sunshine girl named May.
汉语：大家好!我很荣幸站在这里向大家介绍自己.我叫May,是一名初中一年级的学生.我有很多朋友,他们都说我很开朗.我有很多爱好,像游泳,唱歌,跳舞,画画等等.我还会弹吉他,敲架子鼓,弹钢琴.我最喜欢的动画片是《名侦探柯南》.柯南是一个有名的侦探.我喜欢他不仅是因为他很酷,也是因为他很聪明.那么,这就是我,一个叫May的阳光女孩.