英语作文求修改 Advertisements can be seen everywhere in o

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英语作文求修改 Advertisements can be seen everywhere in o
英语作文求修改
Advertisements can be seen everywhere in our life.Everything has two sides.The good sides and bad sides.some people think they can find they need information
For instance they can find a job or look for where can buy something they need
so use good mood to see it

没什么好改的.就是觉得你最后一句不知道你想表达些什么.语法没错误.如果要得高分些,应该加多 点连续词.同一意思用不同表达
PS这个是课文吧.好熟悉.好像是高三的.初三狗怎么写 哈哈 我缩略了一下 打字太累了这样子。有前途。最好的方法是和老师讨论下。问老师如果使这文章更好