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金色的触动
落叶缤纷,如蝴蝶般翩翩下落,那是金色的国度,留下一地哀伤与凄凉,旋转,旋转.
她不爱玫瑰的一袭红裳也不爱百合的满身清香,她只要这一身朴素的妆容,盘旋在这金色的世界里,她凄凉的感叹着这世界的不公,那一季的华丽太过短暂,还没来得及欣赏,她的青春便逝去了.她想着,想让这最后的舞蹈为生命画上完美的句号.旋转,旋转,愿着金色的世界将她迷醉,忘记那些伤痛,忘记那些坎坷.闭上眼,闭上眼,不要让那泪水流出,浸湿了我这最后的霓裳.飞吧,飞吧,远离这尘世间,她渐渐远去,那孤零零的影子满载着内心的悲凉寂寞.
风吹过,她幻化做凄美的枯叶蝶,翩翩起舞.
远处嬉戏的孩子们叫喊着：“看那!看那边多美呀!”
梦醒了,她醉了,
那一瞬她惊呆了,她本以为自己早已被世界遗弃,她本以为无人会注意她眼里的悲哀,她本以为属于她的只有那一片孤寂的黑暗.可是她错了,她以为是自己的懦弱让她最终走向死亡,她以为这永远的离别会让她超脱,她笑着流泪了.孩子童真的声音唤醒了麻痹着生命的她,她不甘心,不甘心成为这金色世界里的堕落者.眼前这一片美丽而神圣的金色,触动了她那颗冰冷的心,那童真的呼唤触动了她颗沉睡的生命.
天空在召唤她,*在召唤她.她要成为这世间最美的舞者,她要用这婀娜的舞姿征服这世界,闭上眼,闭上眼听着风儿的歌她沉醉在自己的舞蹈中,旋转,旋转一心只想展现这生命最后的璀璨瞬间,一路留下金色的轨迹,那是她的心在燃烧,是她的生命在燃烧,烈火如歌,她旋舞着,只为赢得一声对生命的赞叹.
越来越近了,那是枯叶蝶的尸体堆成的金色大地,解脱了命运的羁绊与束缚,她骄傲的笑了,最后一个转身,望着那天空,残阳如血,那是在感叹她那最华丽的舞蹈,她赢了,赢得一个对生命的不悔,她勇敢的张开双臂,带着满身炫目的金色,扑向这盛大的死亡.
The Snows of Kilimanjaro
This story revolves around a writer who,about to die from gangrene which he got from a thorn prick,regrets how little he has achieved in his writings.
The story starts off with the writer lying on a cot rambling on with his wife sitting next to him.She is trying to do what she can to help but he is only satisfied with saying really hurtful things towards her.
He described death as a curiosity that often intrigued him,but now annoyed him because his life was ending and he was not satisfied with what he had accomplished.The gangrene in his right leg made dying painless,also he was too tired to worry about dying; that combination,I believe,is what cleared his mind so that he was more prone to dwell on the negativity of his past.
He then starts to argue with his wife,blaming her for his lavish way of living.He believed because of the decadent way he lived he was too distracted to write about the things that mattered most to him and took things for granted.
Towards the end of the story he comes to realize that he shouldn’t blame his wife for his failures,and that it would have been the same had it been any other lady.He started to even appreciate the kind of woman he had because of how little she quarreled with him,even though he knew he never really loved her but just became comfortable with her.Even though he experienced so much in his life,he died full of feeling he had accomplished nothing because he lived only for moments without considering the future.
Some feel that Hemingway’s own fears motivated such a story.Some of the concerns mentioned in another book of his “Green Hills” were “politics,women,drink,money and ambition.” He also felt that if he hung out with rich people too much that he would be less true to himself and that would reflect in his writings.
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