I failed ,I despair,Ultimately chose to quit ,Congratulations on your ,Your success ,I beat

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I failed ,I despair,Ultimately chose to quit ,Congratulations on your ,Your success ,I beat
我失败了,我绝望了,最终选择了退出,恭喜你,你成功了,成功把我打败,我退出.
是这样的么 可以这样翻译不
或者给我个准确的翻译 ,

可以稍稍改一下,把“最后我选择退出”改为“最终我选择了放弃”