帮我批改一下英语作文吧,
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帮我批改一下英语作文吧,
May,20th,Saturday
Yesterday,I with my classmate planed to climbing worth mountain and had a picnic.In the morning,we called togather at 7 o'clock in school gate.Soon,it was raining,but we took bicycle continue,and we arrived the foot of the mountain for an hour later.For a moment,the rain was stoped,so we climbed the mountain and appreciate great sign.Then,we took photographes,sang,leaped,made games,cheesed,and felt so happy.At last,after lunch,we went down the mountain and all people felt too tired.
答
首先日记格式不对,请参照如下标准.英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成.日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情.中、英文的日记三格式大致一样.英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和...