请看一下这段英文是否有语法错误,帮我标注并改正,

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请看一下这段英文是否有语法错误,帮我标注并改正,
let me hug your gentleness .
you put your most beautiful youth gave me,
i'll take a lifetime to cherish this only belong to my vicky.
中文
让我拥抱你的温柔,
你把你的最美丽的青春送给了我的,
我要用一生的时间去珍惜你,只属于我的维琪。

let me hug you gently.让我温柔的拥抱你.
you gave your beautiful youth to me.你把美丽的青春给了我.
I only belong to you,my Vicky.I will use my whole life to cherish you.