求英语作文：at that moment,I smiled

When it comes to the moment I smile most happily,I will certainly choose the visit to the home for the aged,because I have learned a lot during the experience.Last week,my classmates and I planned to pay a visit to the old people..We wanted to give some performances to the them.My job was to sing an old song.I practiced very hard every night.Though I faced some difficulty,I managed to come across them at last.The performance turned out to be a great success.At the moment,I smiled proudly,because I could do something to make others happy.I also realized that I should always do something for the people in need.Only if all the people feel happy,can I smile more often in the future.
当它来的时候我笑的最开心,我一定会选择去养老院,因为我学到了很多的经验.上周,我和我的同学们计划去拜访老百姓.我们想给一些表演给他们.我的工作是唱一首古老的歌.我每天晚上都很努力练习.虽然我遇到困难,我终于在最后.演出取得了很大的成功.此刻,我自豪地笑了,因为我可以做一些让别人快乐.我也意识到我应该做一些需要的人.如果所有的人都感到高兴,我能经常微笑的未来.