改写课文,改写为第三人称.
改写课文,改写为第三人称.
以A Boy‘s Terrible Day为题改写为第三人称形式.
原文:Yesterday was a terrible day.My alarm didn't go off so I woke up late.It was seven thirty when I woke up,and I needed to be at school by eight!I ran to the bus stop...but,I still missed the bus.It was eight thirty when I got to school.My teacher was angry and I felt bad all day At four thirty it was time to go home.I was waiting for the bus when...all of a sudden...it began to rain heavily It was like...a really crazy rainstorm!I thought I had an umbrella in my schoolbag,so I kept trying to look for it.I was so busy looking for the umbrella that I didn't see a car coming.And it got water all over me!I was waiting like that..completely wet...for maybe almost an hour.finally the bus came and brought me home.I took a hot shower and ate some warm food.It felt so good to be home!
A Boy‘s Terrible Day
Yesterday was a terrible day.(His) alarm didn't go off so (he) woke up late.It was seven thirty when (he) woke up,and (he) needed to be at school by eight!(He) ran to the bus stop...but (he) still missed the bus.It was eight thirty when (he) got to school.(his) teacher was angry and (he) felt bad all day.At four thirty it was time to go home.(He) was waiting for the bus when...all of a sudden...it began to rain heavily.It was like...a really crazy rainstorm!(He) thought (he) had an umbrella in (his) schoolbag,so (he) kept trying to look for it.(He) was so busy looking for the umbrella that (he) didn't see a car coming.And it got water all over (hem)!(He) was waiting like that..completely wet...for maybe almost an hour.Finally the bus came and brought (him) home.(He) took a hot shower and ate some warm food.It felt so good to be home!