请问英文友语法错误码,怎麼样可以修改的通顺些啊,

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请问英文友语法错误码,怎麼样可以修改的通顺些啊,
However,the protection is not so satisfactory that there have been obstacles in the path of shareholders exercising their rights.

表达及语法上没有问题
容易理解
也颇地道地
真的要挑剔
就是用了in the path of
对於要打达的内容来说
不够直接
但基本上是没有问题的