英语.帮我看下哪句更好些,判断有没有语法上的错误或逻辑上的错误,例如会不会有点中国式英语
问题描述：
英语.帮我看下哪句更好些,判断有没有语法上的错误或逻辑上的错误,例如会不会有点中国式英语
I like History,because I can know what the ancient China was like by learing History,
还是这句好点
I like History,because I can know what China was like in the old days by learning History.
答
1.I like History,because I can know what the ancient China was like by learing History
改：I like History,because I will know what the ancient China was like by learing it
2.I like History,because I will know what China was like in the old days by learning it
又或者用The reason for my loving history is that it makes me gain more details about the history of ancient China.这个更文本一些