帮忙改一篇英语作文,急

帮忙改一篇英语作文,急
Some people argue that it is better for individuals to be self-employed,while others think it is more beneficial to work for a company or an institution.In my opinion,I can see both positive and negative aspects of this argument.Whether you should be self-employed,it is dependent on the situation your owu.
People who support that people should being self-employed say that it is ditlicult to find a decent job in this recently economic downturn.Opening your own business could be a optional replacement.What is more,lt also could create certain employment opportunities for other work seekers.In my own country,the government encourages young undergraduates even postgraduates to operate their own business.This policy has contributed to reducing laid-off labors and boosting private business means encouraging individuals to invest money,but most of investments have certain latent risks.If their private businessse were frustrated or failed.They must confront with the same problem that is finding a job.So how to open and maintein a privote business is our new focus.
People who are in favor of working for a compary or institution also point out that people working for a compory or institution could get a fixed salary and benefits,which can lead to a more stable life.In my opinion,I think they are right.But the opportunities of joining into a company or institution are limited,it is more likely that there are less and less companies in this society,if we do not encourage people to run their own business.
To conclude,generally though,there are both problms and benefits of self-employment and working for companies or institutions.But I think they are both good.