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I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that,I'll unable to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks it is had for my eye.But I really can't accept her ideas.In my opinin,watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day's hard wprks.Besides,it's important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad.Thus,we should't be forbidden to watch TV.

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I often quarrel (about改为with) my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.She holds (加入the) view that senior three students have to make (fully改成full) use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.It seems to (me改成her) that once I am allowed to do that,I'll (加入be) unable to control myself and forget all about my study.She also thinks it is bad for my (eye改为eyes).But I really can't accept her ideas.In my opinion,(watch改为watching) TV can set my mind at rest after a day's hard (works改成work).Besides,it's important for us to know what (had改为has) happened at home and (去掉at) abroad.Thus,we shouldn't be forbidden to watch TV.
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