英语改错高手进,急用,

英语改错高手进,急用,
When I was 5,my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved.Every day I practised playing it though my father demanded.But before long,I transferred my interest in the piano to some other thing so I began to avoid practise it.When my father realized this,he encouraged me,but was strict with me than before.With her help,I went the hardest time and made great progress.Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father.On the journey of life,our parents have lit the light of hope for us.What they have done broaden our horizon.No one deserves bigger thanks than to our parents.