the great person I admire作文

多少字The person I admire the most is Bill Gates. As we all know, he is the person who originate Mirosoft, which is the most influencial IT company inthe world. And he was the richest person in 21th century.

One of the reason that he succeed is that he has original thinking. He does not think in general ways, like most people dose. For example, in 1980s, people did not believe that the computer can be used in work because the computer in that time was very complex to operate. But Bill did not think so. He thought that he can creat a new kind of operating system for computer so that it is much more convenient for people to operate the compuer. So he concentrated on new system creation. Finally, he succeed. He produced a new operating system call Windows. That progress made people who used it feel much more convenient. Immidiatly, almost all the computer installed this system and Bill made a good deal of money.

He's succeed teaches us, change the way that you are thinking, one day, you may just succeed.

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