短文改错注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处C very touching incid

短文改错注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处C very touching incid
以下正文:
A very touching incidents happened in our class today - the first day of this team. At the end of last term, it is really cold. during a class, one of the student, Zhang Li,found that our teaches Mr Lin’s hands had been hurt because the boldness. Mr Lin is a good teaches respected by many student,included Zhang Li, so she decided to make him a pair of gloves by the hand. she finished that on the winter holidays . Today she handed her gift to Mr Lin, that wasmoved to tears.We were moved, either.I think Zhang Li set a goodexample to them.We often forget to thank people who are around us daily ,but we actually should be grateful to their everyday help
会的人帮忙做一下,谢过、