This week is special,because this Saturday was lunar New Year!求检查语法错误!
This week is special,because this Saturday was lunar New Year!求检查语法错误!
This week is special,because this Saturday was lunar New Year!Although I didn’t ate dumpling or set off firework but I was really very happy.Beside this is my first time celebrate Spring Festival without myself,a little upside but it’s ok.I like ChunWan very much and I thought it was the best one I have seen.
1.because在句中 special后面不加逗号 只有在because在句首时 才加
2. didn't 已经是过去是后面动词eat写原型 不能写过去式ate
3. dumpling和firework后都要要加s
4. 用了although就不用用but了两者任选其一删掉一个
5. Beside做“除此之外”来讲时用“besides”更好 后面要加逗号因为后面跟的是整句话
6. celebrate 应该用现在分词形式 celebrating
7. without改为bymyself后改为句号
8.后面一句 a little 前面加上It is. 然后upside改成upset. ChunWan要加引号 然后前面加the或者this year‘s
9.thought改为think, was 改为is 更好一点 因为你现在还是这么认为的并是不只是以前这么认为