求改作文（英文）

求改作文（英文）
主要改下语法,时态之类的：
As the vividly drawing is shown ,a young man has a name of beckham on his face,and another man has a hair style which is the same as beckham.this thought-provoking picture illustrates that superstar has a huge influence on the youngs.
The influence from superstar can have a good effect on the youngs,if the superstar's social activity is positive and helpful to the youngs,and the youngs will accept it more easily,because they love their star,and follow them.so the superstar should take the duty to lead the youngs to bright future.on the contrary,if the superstar can not show their social duty,or even break it,which will have a bad effect on the society ,especially to youngs.
Above all,superstar's behaviour is not just related to himself,but also have a directly effect on youngs,so they should have more social responsibilities to lead the youngs,and together we can make our society more harmonious.