中译英:一个人能否成功取决于诸多因素.可以这样翻吗?

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中译英:一个人能否成功取决于诸多因素.可以这样翻吗?
A man who is succeeded or not is decided by many factors
或者写更好的翻译版本
一个人能否成功取决于诸多因素.可以这样翻吗?

Whether a man can succeed or not is decided by many factors.
这样更地道些.