求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q

求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q
Do you know why you’re sick A lots of people experience some kind of mental health problem in the course of year .If you fail to tackle these problems,they are likely to contribute to various illness ,be is physical or psychological.So if it happen,it will lead to you ill.
Why do people experience so many mental health problem Because now social pressure is more and more big.
There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy .Firstly you should find why should that be .Secondly you can go where you like trip .Lastly,you may find it helpful to talk to your partner,a relative or a friend about your problems,or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant.