i want to make friends with youbecause my major is English ,but ,sometime ,i can speak English fluent and sometime make mistake too more .and in school i seldom open my mounth .i so afraid when i have a chance speak English .so i want to make a friend with you if you are good at English and you want to help me .you can send a message to my baidu space if you want and i will tell my detail contact detail addess

I'm ready to help the person who need help ,but how do I get in touch with you?

I'm also English major

very good, are u student? I'm in 3 year colleage. If you general self study. I can give you some tips.
You can speack fluency english is very good, but I don't know what level is....to begin using your language, so try to use what you learn as soon as possible. Try to form frienships or acquaintances with people who are speakers of the language your are studing.
English is more involed in learnng a new language than just new words and sounds, behind every language is new culture and a new way to think. Try to learn as much as you can about the culture of the poeople who speake your language, Keep your eye open for community events in your city's cultural districts.

呵呵，我英语也不好，可以向学习吗？一起进步？

but 后面应该是sometimes
fuluent应该是加ly这里应该是副词
mistake 要复数形式
i（am）so afraid……
have a chance（to）speak english
最后一句tell sb sth才对,
address.