请帮我看看下面的英文错在哪里,谢谢.

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请帮我看看下面的英文错在哪里,谢谢.
经理觉得很惊讶,假使松下不同意的事,大可一口否决就行了.”松下说“你不可以对任何事都说不,对于那些你认为算是过得去的计划,你大可在实行过程中指导他们,使他们重新回到你所预期的轨迹.我想一个*有时应该接受他不喜欢的事,因为任何人都不喜欢被否定.”
The manager felt very surprised,he can deny immediatly if Panasonic disagree.However,Kounosuke Matsushita said " you can't say to everthing, you can guide the implementation process for those planyou think is so-so, , so that they can return to the track of what you expected. I think a leader sometimes should accept the things he doesn't like because no one want to be deny."

1、“The manager felt very surprised,he can deny immediatly if Panasonic disagree.”这句缺一个连接词,因为逗号前后算作一句话,但是你这句没有一个让它们连成一句话的连接词.在he前加for或其他适当的连接词.
2、倒数第四个单词want改为wants,因为no one 后面的谓语需用第三人称单数形式.