BEC 中级 的作文 我写的怎么样,
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BEC 中级 的作文 我写的怎么样,
Dear All,
The reason why i whrite this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down,at 5 PM wednesday,to make an improvement .and because we will lose all the files in disk C after the improvement,we have to move all the files that is usefull to other disk.
After the improvement will could get a faster speed when using the internet,then we will work more effciently.
Best regards
Derek
答
第一句的话有点累赘了哦可以用这样一个句式Iwriteto inform you that ~句式更加简洁CONCISE~will be closed down to make an improvement at 5PM wednesday.我觉得要中间来个时间的插入语,这样比较好吧.we have ...