请问下这句话翻译的对吗

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请问下这句话翻译的对吗
如果有错的地方麻烦达人帮忙改下,谢谢
等待雨,是伞一生的宿命...
Waiting for rain, is the umbrella of the fate of a lifetime...

Waiting for rain, is the fate ofumbrella for a lifetime...