英语高手来看看,看我这段英文的大小写有没有错?

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英语高手来看看,看我这段英文的大小写有没有错?
Hello,everybody.my name is Dong xi.Am glad to know you.I'm twelve years old.I very like look book and draw.thank you.

Hello,everyone.My name is Dong Xi.I am glad to meet you.I'm twelve years old.I like reading books and painting very much.Thank you.
不光是大小写,有其他地方也有些问题..
重新帮你改了下..