帮忙写一篇高中水平的英语作文!

【参考一】
August 2nd,Thursday
Dear Mickey,
I’d love to tell you something about my vacation.
I’ve been looking forward to visiting the Po Yang Lake for a long time.Yesterday,with my friends,I paid a visit to it.We set off at 7:00 am by bus.It is 8 kilometers away from our city,and when we got there,it was 7:20 am.
There we had a wonderful time.We spent the whole morning boating and fishing on the lake.Then we had picnic by the lake.In the afternoon,we climbed the snake island,picked the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures.
Time passed very fast.Before we knew it,it was already 16:00,we had to go back.
How about your vacation?Please write me as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考二】
August 2nd
Dear Mickey,
I’m pleased to write to tell you something about my summer vacation visit.Yesterday it was Wensday and also the first day of August,it was fine and lovely.I went to the Po Yang Lake with my friends,which is 8 kilometers far from our city.We set off at 7:00 in the morning by bus and a twenty-minute drive we arrived there.We spent the whole morning boating and fishing on the lake.Then we had a picnic lunch by the lake.After lunch we climbed the snake island in the lake.We enjoyed ourselves picking wild flowers and taking a lot of pictures.We really had a wonderful time.We came back at 16:00 pm.
How are you getting along with your vocation?I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
LiHua
注：百度一定要我顶格些,所以格式有点问题,你自己改下吧