急求纠正语法,并更正!
问题描述：
急求纠正语法,并更正!
Each people all have own dream,dream leads us forward.My dream is to be a dancer.Since I was young,I began to practice dancing,no matter how hard the process of practice,I have always insisted.I hope one day I can stand on the stage,let everybody appreciate my graceful dancing,clapping for me!
答
改正如下：Each person all has own dream, dream leads us forward.My dream is to be a dancer.Since I was young, I have begun to practice dancing, no matter how hard the process of practice is, I have been always insisted.I hope one day I can stand on the stage, let everybody appreciate my graceful dancing, clap for me!望采纳,O(∩_∩)O