We'll never forget the day when my classmates and I paidvisit to a private farm last week .There h
We'll never forget the day when my classmates and I paidvisit to a private farm last week .There h
We'll never forget the day when my classmates and I paidvisit to a private farm last week .There have nearly 500 farm workers on it.It looks as a nice big garden.We could see colorful flowers,grass,and trees anywhere,We visited some rice fields there and saw all the workers worked very hard.By talking to the farmers and the workers we learned a lot and understand them further.All of us feltwhen we returned back to school .And we thought that we had a very good day.What we really hope is that we can get more chance in the future to leave the school in order to learn social experience....改10处错误的,
We'll never forget the day when my classmates and I(1)paid a visit to a private farm last week .There (2) were nearly 500 farm workers on it.It looks (3)like a nice big garden.Wecould see colorful flowers,grass,and trees (4)everywhere.Wevisited some rice fields there and saw all the workers (5)work very hard.By talking to the farmers and the workers,we learned a lot and (6)understood them further.All of us felt (6) tired when we returned (7)(去掉back)to school.(8)(And 换成But) we thought that we had a very good day.What we really hope is that we can get more chance in the future to leave the school (9)(去掉in order) to learn social (10)experiences.