部分英语句子帮忙看看有没有错.
问题描述：
部分英语句子帮忙看看有没有错.
This is my favourite film of all the films about it.这是我在关于它的电影中最喜欢我一部.
I made many new friends there.我在那里交到了许多新朋友.
What a meaningful Summer Camp!
I went to XXXXXX to join in a Math Summer Camp.我去XXXXX参加了一个数学夏令营.
如果帮到我了,一定重赏!
答
第一个没有语法问题,但是你这样说 film of all the films 什么的相当拗口,我建议改为Out of all the films about it,this is my favorite one.就比较通顺不饶了第二个 没有问题第三个感叹句没有问题,但是summer camp...We were tired，because of the friends I also felt happy.我们很疲倦，但是因为有了朋友，我仍然感到快乐。这句话总觉得有那么点问题。语法有没有问题呢？有问题，建议改为 We were very tired, but I still felt happy because of my friends.一个是要加入 but (但是) 另外一个是still （仍然）才逻辑上比较通顺，你中文里都写了怎么英文里就不写了捏