谁能帮我改改这篇英语作文

谁能帮我改改这篇英语作文
My experience oflearningEnglish
Myexperiencewithlearning english beganin primary school ,when I took my first English class.in grade four.My teacher often ask us to go to the platform.And when she spoke
Organs of our bodies in English.,we must touch thecorrectsite..
Fromthen on ,Ishow a great interest inEnglish .such as watch the movies from America andEngland,communicate withEnglish native speakers.What”s more,IoftenspokeEnglish to my parents. In fact,they didn”t understand me yet.But I still love speaking English.
When I went to junior middle school,maybe I amnot fintin the teacher”s teaching methods.
So I found English class was upset and boring . Because all we can do were remembering words,
Doing reading comprehensions. To me , learning a foreign language was just speaking it fluently.
Instead of doing exercises..the teaching methods made me very confused. But only I can do was
Accepted .otherwise ,I wouldfall behind others .
The situation did not change until I went to university .we could use modern facilities to learn English .teacher combine look andlisten .wecould learn English in many ways.Not
Repeating the same style.. we can surftheinternet .,and use theSKYPE to talk with
People who speak English very well . I am excited about these freestyles . I can open
My horisen,try my best to learn English.
I believe ,nothing in the world is difficult if you put your heart into it .
My experience of learning English will go on,I will spend my effort to be the best one.