修改病句.每一行都有一个语病.英语无能.Orz求教.[忽略大小写忽略几个词语的英文错误]

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修改病句.每一行都有一个语病.英语无能.Orz求教.[忽略大小写忽略几个词语的英文错误]
a summer night .tom was sleeping soundly when he
was waken up by a loud noise .he got up and looked out of
the window .to his great surprise .he saw the house near was
on fire .he shouted on the top of his voice ."fire!fire!"
then he ran out and found many people there try to
help put out the fire.of course ,he joined in them .they
tried hard to bring water ,the fire was too big .it seemed
that controlled the fire was impossible .
luckily ,firemen arrived in time .in no time they control
the fire and put out twenty minutes later.

第一行,At a summer night ,加一个介词;第二行,out of改为through,介词使用错误;第三行,near改为nearly,应该使用副词;第四行,on the top of his voice 改为with the top voice;第五行,try改为were trying,时态错...