英语四级作文,帮我看看哪里错的和要改进的呗（我英语不咋地）,嘻嘻……
英语四级作文,帮我看看哪里错的和要改进的呗（我英语不咋地）,嘻嘻……
What Electives to Choose
The college is the most important station in our life!In the college ,we need to use all kinds of knowledge to enrich us!So ,choose some suitable electives for us is an impantant way to get knowledge!
Face to all kinds of electives,everyone have their own thinking and choice.Some people like drawing ,they choose art.Some people like sports,they choose PE.Even some people else choose a lesson just that they want to relax!
In my opinion ,what electives to choose depend on our habit and what you want to know more!We have to know that we can improve us on the one hand by habits!As far as i am concerned ,i like computer so i choose computer science and i am really study it well.
All in all,we have pat attention to what kind of electives to choose,in order to make us better!
choose some suitable electives for us is an impantant way to get knowledge!
头重脚轻了,应该改成It's an important way to choose some suitable electives for us to get knowledge!
Face to 改成facing.
thinking改成thought.
just that they want to relax! 把that改成for 或者as.
we have pat 改成we have to pay
make us better改成us后面加一个动词,可以是become等等.
敝人能力有限,希望能帮到你一些.帮助很多了！！不过我想知道thinking改为thought是语法的哪个方面，好补一补，谢谢啦