求大神帮忙看一下这段英语有没有语法错误!As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon,two young people are having football a match.One of the football player is preparing to shoot,he thinks the goal keeper is so strong that he is impossible to shoot in.Yet the goal keeper is nervous,he is afraid that he can’t defend the goal successively,feels that he is too small and lack of ability to defend the goal.It is obvious that both of the football players are not confident enough to t
求大神帮忙看一下这段英语有没有语法错误!
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon,two young people are having football a match.One of the football player is preparing to shoot,he thinks the goal keeper is so strong that he is impossible to shoot in.Yet the goal keeper is nervous,he is afraid that he can’t defend the goal successively,feels that he is too small and lack of ability to defend the goal.It is obvious that both of the football players are not confident enough to themselves.
having football a match 改为 having a football match
he is impossible 改为 it it impossible 没有这说法 只有it is adj
having football a match改为having a football match
he thinks the goal keeper is so strong that he is impossible to shoot in 太中国化，应该说he thinks the goal keeper is so strong that it is impossible for him to shoot in
最后一句are not confident enough to themselves 改为are not confident enough themselves.
考研英语作文吧 但从语法上来讲 存在小问题 不过感觉还是可以多看几个模板 多运用几种句型As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon,two young people are having a football match.One of the football player is pre...