请帮忙看一下下面这段话是否通顺、正确,有没有语法错误,Today ,it’s new year that Chinese traditional festival,I just represent myself say happy new year to everyone!In a past year ,we've got a lot of harvest,all of this couldn't depart with your work hard,so I proposal that let's us hold the goblet,to wish the next year willbe better!Cheers!

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请帮忙看一下下面这段话是否通顺、正确,有没有语法错误,
Today ,it’s new year that Chinese traditional festival,I just represent myself say happy new year to everyone!In a past year ,we've got a lot of harvest,all of this couldn't depart with your work hard,so I proposal that let's us hold the goblet,to wish the next year willbe better!Cheers!

It is Chinese traditional Spring Festival today . I just represent myselfe to say happy new year to everyone ! In the past year , we've got a lot of achievement, which attributed to your hard work.So , let's all take glasses , blessing for a better tomorrow .Cheers!
你应该是把这段话用在酒桌上的。这样说比较口语化~

Today,it's the first day in the lunar calendar which is called spring festival,I just want to say happy new year to everyone on behalf of myself!In the last year,we achieved a lot.And these all depended on your hard work.So let's drink,and wish a better year!Cheers!

Today ,it’s Chinese New years day.(这里这麼说就行了,外国人懂什麽是Chinese new year). I would like to represent myself to say happy new year to everyone! In the past year , we got a good harvest,all...

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