请帮我看看这一段英文有无语法错误.我己经没有财富值了,如果错误的话,请写正确答案.Computer is one of the essential things,we can use the computer to do many things,such as doing homework,send e-mail,computer is convenient,welcome by the people,but the computer also has disadvantage.

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请帮我看看这一段英文有无语法错误.
我己经没有财富值了,如果错误的话,请写正确答案.
Computer is one of the essential things,we can use the computer to do many things,such as doing homework,send e-mail,computer is convenient,welcome by the people,but the computer also has disadvantage.