『求英语帝』帮我改一下语法错误i am on the way to death .many flowers are shaking their hands to me .but i cant lose my soul because i have you .my lover did you listen to my song that's my heart singing
问题描述：
『求英语帝』帮我改一下语法错误
i am on the way to death .many flowers are shaking their hands to me .but i cant lose my soul because i have you .my lover did you listen to my song that's my heart singing
答
基本没问题,最后一句错了一点.
应该是did you listen to my song that my heart is singing