利用一些食盐我们就可以使鸡蛋漂浮在水面上.写作文介绍使鸡蛋漂浮在水面上的实验过程.准备半杯水、食盐、一颗鸡蛋将鸡蛋放入杯中.鸡蛋在杯子底部在杯中加入食盐搅拌继续加食盐并搅拌,你会看到鸡蛋浮起.  Floating an eggFirst,plan one half of water\some salt and  an egg.Then put the egg into the cup.The egg is in the bottom of the cup.Next ,add some salt to the cup of water.After that ,star the water.Finally,continue add salt to the water.You will see the egg float.How interesting experiment is!You can make it.

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Float an egg
First,prepar half cup of water，some salt and an egg.Then put the egg into the cup.The egg is at the bottom of the cup.Next ,add some salt to the water of the cup.After that ,stir the water.Finally,continue to add salt into the water. You will see the egg float.How interesting the experiment is! You can make it.

Firstly,prepare a half of water,some salt andan egg.Secondly, put the egg into the cup.The egg is at the bottom of the cup.Thirdly,add some salt to the water ,and mix it.At last ,continue to add salt.and you will see the egg float.How interesting the experiment is.You can make it.

the egg is in the bottom of the cup-------the egg will be at the bootom of the cup
star the water------stir the water
continue add salt to the water-------into the water
make it-------do it
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你写的很不错哦.有些小细节要修改.First, prepare half a cup of water, some salt and an egg.Then, put the egg into the cup. You can see the egg is at the bottom of the cup. Next ,add some salt into the ...