检查英语语法在线等year I went Beijing with my mother.I felt so happy that I went the capital of china.We went the Summer Palace at night.Unluckily I lost my way.I had no way to find my mother because there were so many people in it.I cool down myself.Suddenly,I thought of the police so that l went to the police station.The police helped me to find my mother.I felt very happy.That told me,difficulty was not afraid just cool down youself.

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检查英语语法在线等
year I went Beijing with my mother.I felt so happy that I went the capital of china.We went the Summer Palace at night.Unluckily I lost my way.I had no way to find my mother because there were so many people in it.I cool down myself.Suddenly,I thought of the police so that l went to the police station.The police helped me to find my mother.I felt very happy.That told me,difficulty was not afraid just cool down youself.

1,“Last year I went Beijing with my mother.” went后面少个to
2,“ I felt so happy that I went the capital of china.”went后面也少个to
3,“I cool down myself”cool应该为cooled
其他都没语法错误,但有些表达的很肤浅.