下面这句话语法哪里错了呢?

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下面这句话语法哪里错了呢?
If you want more freedom but less cost in your trip,it would be a better choice for you to travel by yourself.放到word里面显示有问题,但是把but 改成yet 就没问题了.可是现在这样又错在哪了呢?

不是in your trip,应该是on your trip.
其他没有错误了.